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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；请注意分段。
Judging from the table, we can see that people's income increases along with their education levels. Above all，the average college graduates earn much more than the typical high-school graduates. The fact revealed by these data is obvious: a degree does bring distinctive financial benefits to its holders. But is it true that a degree alone can ensure a bright future? I don't think so because, on the one hand, the financial value of high education depends heavily on what skills graduates can gain from it instead of the degree itself. After all, an employer only pays for your ability and performance, not for your certificate. On the other hand, the most valuable bless high education brings to graduates is the ability to learn quickly and efficiently. People received more education tend to keep lifelong learning habits after their graduation, which would help them gain more opportunities in their career
