2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays we get a date base from Bureau of labor statistics which are for persons age 25 and over. the reserch shows if education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rats. the average of unemployment rate in 2011 is 7.6%, the people who get the Bachelor's degree, Master's degree, Professional degree, Doctoral degree can find a job easier, they can earning more than 1000 dollars weekly. but the people who graduated in some college, no degree, high school diploma, less than high school diploma is hard to find a job. their unemployment rate is over 7.6, and they earn less money, less than 1000 weekly. from the date, we know if we want to reduce the unemployment rate, we should pay more money in education, and expand the scop of teaching. let more people have the chance to learning.