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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6330
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中句式变化多样,同时从句使用很棒;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇。

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trust is the basic of communication,we need to maintain trust on people in our usual lives,only in this way ,can we make friends with more person. firstly, we should try to keep trust with our parents,as we know,children always make mistakes when they do something out of mind,and they can not do everytjing with their full concentration,once they have done something wrong ,they need to apologize and make sure not to lie to their parents,next time when the children need a hand from their parents ,I believe their parents will love to help them without hesitiation. secondly,we should try to keep trust with our friend,it is said that when you get other's trust successfully,people will love to make cooperation with you next time,and we need to other's help when we are get away from home. in a word,trust shorter the distance between people who are unfamiliar with each other,it is a bridge for you to get into other's heart

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