2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识扎实，但文中从句数量稍显不足；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，学术词汇使用稍显不足；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。

Life is like a roller coaster,It has its ups and downs.But it’s your choice to scream or enjoy the ride.I like this sentence very much.But most of the time,I think life more like plain boilded water,insipid.go to work,get off work,eat,sleep,day by day.maybe someday you meet someone then you both have a crush on each other, In the end,you getting married,have a baby, pay for house…passion,romance will ultimately be replaced of life.