2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Here are two searching diagrams, one is about the relation between unemployment rate and education degree, another is between Median weekly earning and education degree. From that, we first find that the percent of unemployment decline with the education's improving. those people whose educational level is less than high school is the most difficult to find a job. the unemployment rate of those them is 14.1%. instead, people who got a Doctoral may be very easy to be unemployment. Only 2.5% of them are unemployed. From the diagram 2, we also can see the weekly earning increased as their degree improved basically. But people whose have professional degrees may be more possible to get more money than those have Doctoral degree. in general, we get to know that the higher we can get the education, we will be easier to get a good job and get more money.