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假设你是Peter, 你的笔友李华最近很不开心, 下面是你收到的他的电子邮件。请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信。针对他的问题, 谈谈你的看法, 同时提出一些帮助他解决问题的建议。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. I am really unhappy these days because I didn’t pass the English exam. I often find it hard to understand reading materials. I think maybe it’s because there are so many difficult words in them and I seldom read English after class. Besides, some materials are really boring for me.
What should I do? Can you give me some suggestions?
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re unhappy now. ______________________________________
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Peter
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。
Dear Li Hua, I’m sorry to hear that you’re unhappy now.I don't think you should be worried about the exam.I think you should find interest about English.Then you have to learn English as the second language. So,how could you do to study English well?First of all, you must to remember many words.You can remember by reading them aloud.And pronunciation can help you remember the words easily.And I had some grammar problems when I beginning studying English.You can do more exercise. What's more,you can do more conversation with you friends.That's my secret of studying English. However,a correct attitude is the most important factor. I hope your English grads will have the progress. Yours, Peter.
