2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达用的较灵活，同时能够较恰当地使用学术词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

In recent years,with the increasing improvement of the internet, more and more people use computers in our common life.It is well-known that computers make the life more convenient and funny.No one can deny the fact that we cannot emphasise the importance of computers too much.If computers can think like human beings,it may be a good thing.Nevertheless,what a terrible thing that human beings think like computers! Why do I say like that? To begin, people think like computers, which means that we will live a life without innovation.Thus, we will never progress.What's more, people think like computers,which makes the communication without emotion.The humor ,funny and love will gradually disappear. From what has been discussed above,we can easily draw a conclusion that computers are significant in our dailly life, however,we cannot think like computers,and we should communicate with each other in realistic life instead of on the internet.