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字数:300 满分:100分
文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;能够简单运用一些从句;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
be a smart consumers in my opinion ,all this may not make us smart consumers. first people are so greedy that they buy something they do not need.second,many seller light their price when consumers use coupons.third,we can not enjoy the fun of shopping. in a word ,all this may not make us smart consumers,we should according our reality to buy things we need.