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字数：300 满分：100分
拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Saving Money As students ,we are inclined to spend less money on products with possible ways .Furthermore,we even are likely to budget with the boss.It is very common among students. As far as I am concerned,this behavior is acceptable .We can not criticize it. Before we can make a living by ourselves we are supported by our parents.All our costs comes from them. They get their wages thorough hard working .Taking their tiredness into account ,our consuming should be wise with limit . Moreover, it is a fact that the price has surged more than twenty percent in the last the years.Our income does not rise accordingly .On the contrary ,RMB has devalued continuously.So we need to use every way in order to save money as much as possible . As a tradition ,our ancestor developed a habit called saving .From the time when we are born we are educated to inherit this good quality .We can not should pass it to the next generation instead of dropping it. We students can benefit a lot in the long run if we cultivated this habit .This is only called wise and cleverness.
