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Recently, the issue of will the tourism bring harm to the environment has been brought into public focus. And different people come up with various attitudes. A large number people think too many tourists may do harm to the environment. For one thing,they said that tourists will liter some gabage when they left. Fo another, some tourists may be draw or wrote on the fall and stole tables. On the contray, quite a few people claim that doesn't mater.Because it will promote our economy and develop our life. As far as I'm concerned, Iam in favor of the former point of view. Although tourism is booming business in China. As an old going says:" protect environment is protect ourselves." Everyone should be in duty bound to protect our environment.
