2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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As the saying goes,where there is a will,there is a way.He,with strength of will,never gives up,no matter what happens. The process of achieving success is just like a marathon,a well-knowed athlete ever said.The person,who holds on to the last,will be the winner.So he did.For instance,Thomas alva Edisen,an inventor with a high prestige in the world,made experiments on 99 different kinds of materials to find which one is the best for a light bulb,but unluckily failed.However, not did he give up.After the one hundredth attempt,an electric incandescent lamp finally came out.In this case,hardly can we deny a willpower plays a crucial role in success. In the same way,as for a student,learning also requires willpower and preservation to overcome external and internal conditions such as laziness or weakness,which can both be barriers to success. In a word,a strong will maybe cannot make sure of your success,but you will not succeed,if there is not a strong will.