2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分学术词汇。

As the saying goes,where there is a will,there is a way.He,with strength of willpower,will never give up,no matter what happens. The process of achieving success is just like a marathon,a well-knowed athlete ever said.The person,who holds on to the last,will be the winner.Thomas alva Edisen,for instance,an inventor with a high prestige in the world,experienced more than ninety-nine failures on finding out which material is the best for a light bulb.However,due to his strong mind,after the one hundredth attempt,an electric incandescent lamp finally came out.Accordingly,hardly can we deny a willpower plays a crucial role in success. In the same way,as for a student,learning also requires willpower and preservation to overcome external and internal conditions such as laziness or weakness,which can both be barriers to success. In a word,a strong will maybe cannot make sure of your success,but you will not succeed,if there is not a strong will.