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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；作者词汇基础扎实。
As the saying goes,where there is a will,there is a way.He,with strength of willpower,will never give up,no matter what happens. The process of achieving success is just like a marathon,a well-knowed athlete ever said.People who holds on to the last,will be the champion.Thomas alva Edisen,for instance,an inventor with a high prestige worldwide,experienced more than ninety failures on culling the best material for a light bulb.However,due to his strong mind,after the one hundredth attempt,an electric incandescent lamp finally came out.Accordingly,hardly can we deny a willpower plays a crucial role in success. In the same way,as for a student,learning also requires willpower and preservation to overcome external and internal conditions such as laziness or weakness,which can both be barriers to success. To conclude,a strong will maybe cannot make sure of your success,but you will not succeed,if there is not a strong will.
