2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

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In now days mang plants and animal species are hurt by human activities.peole have two different oppoins some think that it is too late to do anything about this problem.And others support do some good things form them.I am more support the second view. Now has more and more plants and animals are dead for people.