2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分学术词汇。

As the saying goes,where there is a will,there is a way.He,with strength of willpower,will never give up,whatever happens. The process of achieving success is just like a marathon,a well-knowed athlete ever said,and the person, who holds on to the last,will be the champion.Thomas alva Edisen,for instance,an inventor with a high prestige,experienced over ninety failures on culling the best material for a light bulb.However,it is due to his strong mind,after the one hundredth attempt,that an electric incandescent lamp finally came out.Accordingly,hardly can we deny a willpower plays a critical role in triumph. In the same way,as for a student,learning also requires willpower and preservation to overcome external and internal conditions such as laziness or weakness,which can both be barriers to success. To conclude,a strong will maybe cannot make sure of your triumph,but you will not triumph,if there is not a strong willpower.