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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17432
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;若注意下文中的句法错误,文章会很不错;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请注意分段。

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With the development of living standard of human beings,a great deal of high-tech products come into our daily life such as automatic washer,shower and stool ,etc . It literately seems that the advanced staff only made for the young since the old generation has a few times in applying them.They always abide the old way to solve they life necessary . As for this situation ,the main stream reason ,is that the complex of the products ’ function make it impossible for our grandpa to manage it . And there also is a secondary subjective point figures out that it is not the management issues but the older thought of it that prompt the old to regard all the technology as wasting electricity . What s more,i think that the elder

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