2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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We can know from the picture,that the education pay is becoming more and more expensive, however,the average of median weekly earning is 797 dollar.Meanwhile there are lots of unemployment,the average of unemployment rate is 7.6 percent. the data comes from the current population survey. However, what cause this phenonoment? Many gratuded colleges can't find jobs,because they think they can find more better work,they don't like to do some low salery work. Nowadays,in the college,students can not learn much major knowleged ,so lots of students select to continue to learn,so this would cost much money,and there are lots of training classes ,many parents want theirs kids to be much better education than others,so they pay lots money to training theirs kids.