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Nowadays,there is an increasingly interest in university ranking.Therefore,a heated debate arise over folk,and different views are supported vary from person to person. There are individuals who are under the impression that university ranking is essential for people who want to choose the college what they like.Moreover,college ranking is also regarded as a symbol whether this university is good or not. On the contrary,thoes who aren't agree university ranking ague that it can't reflect any question about colleges.They firmly believe that both advantages and disadvantages are existed in all universities.At same time,if university ranking be continued,especially in China,some colleges lying in low ranking won't be choosed in the future,and some persons will not accept suitable profession. There is some truth in both argument,but I think ranking overweigh opposites.As far as I'm concerned,university ranking is thought to be an important aspect of the strength of colleges.Meantime,people can select universities with direction.So,obviously,university ranking is significant for people.
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