文中词汇使用较丰富恰当,但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。
Nowadays,there is an increasingly interest in university ranking.Therefore,a heated debate arises over folk,and there are different views vary from person to person. There are individuals who are under the impression that university ranking is essential for people who want to choose the college what they like.Moreover,college ranking is also regarded as a symbol whether this university is good or not. On the contrary,those who aren't agree former views ague that it can't reflect any question of colleges.They firmly believe that both advantages and disadvantages are existed in all universities.At same time,if university ranking be continued,especially in China,some colleges lying in low ranking won't be chased in the future,and some persons will not receive a suitable profession. There is some truth in both argument,but I think ranking overweigh opposites.As far as I'm concerned,university ranking is thought to be an important aspect of the competitiveness of colleges.Meantime,people can select universities with aimed.So,obviously,university ranking is significant for people.
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