文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
Nowadays,there is an increasingly interest in starting to form a university ranking.Therefore,a heated debate arises over folk,and people's views vary from person to person. There are individuals who are under the impression that university ranking is essential for people who want to choose the college what they like.Moreover,college ranking is also regarded as a symbol whether this university is good or not. On the contrary,those who aren't support former views ague that it can't reflect any question of colleges.They firmly believe that both advantages and disadvantages are existed in all universities.At same time,if university ranking be continued,especially in China,some colleges lying in low ranking won't be chased in the future,and some persons will not receive a suitable educational. There is some truth in both argument,but I think ranking overweigh opposites.As far as I'm concerned,university ranking is thought to be an important aspect of the competitiveness of colleges.Meanwhile,people can select universities with a purpose.So,obviously,university ranking is significant for people.
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