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As we all know the disposal bags was been used widely sometimes,and there are no doubt that it is important for us and it is cheap.So we can see dieposal bags anywhere, for example in markets or shops. But every coins have tow coins.There are a lot of serions problems when we have used many years disposal bags.The white polltion is a well-know esample.Disposal bags widely usd also destroy our environment and exiting sperics. There is on doubt that ban useing disposal bags have a lot of meanings.Our environment will get better and better.we can give our generations a good future.