2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；运用了丰富的复杂句，另外需注意一些句法错误；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇。

The way to success To be a undergraduated student,we do not have a job for ourselves,maybe success in business is too far away from us,but we can try to strike a balance between our study and success. When we go to class and finish homework in time ,that can be defined a good start of one's study ,forming a good habit does much help to success,and therefore we will get a higher score in finally exam. Besides what I have mentioned above, confident is also very important role to the way of success,if you behave yourself more geneours and liberal,the impression you left others must be convincing.