题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Nowadays the computer has been used in many ways in our normal life. We lay on the computer more and more. Of course ,this equipment and network give us much convenience. We can use it everywhere. When we work, we use computer to communicate, send emails, edit our documents, save important files. When we are at home, we use computer to watch movies, chat with friends, listen music. We spend so much time on the computer and it becomes more and more important in our life. But we still have some problems. Typing is instead of writing. We lose our initial funny of handle the pen. Sometimes we even could not remember how to spell a word on the paper. Chatting on web is instead of talking face to face. The communication between friends become machinally. We are losing our initial social skill. As we save our import photos and files in our computer, when our company is attacked by risk or other person breaks in our computer through net, it is a disaster. In one word, computer is our important friend in current life but we should still learn how to use it in a better way.