2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章学术词汇使用熟练，词汇表达较为丰富；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

When we talk about the relationship between computer and man, the majority people would say that computer is beneficial to human's development and highly appraise the contribution of the computer to the whole society. Firstly, the emergency of the computer has substantially reduced human's work-load. For example, the spacecraft, before it is launched, we need to calculate precisely how many fuels it should bring, which orbit it should run. It would spend several days if we calculate them use human's brain only. However, the widespread use of computer make it evenly need several minutes. Clearly, it is the computer make our work more leisure and much easier. Secondly, the invention of technology and products based on the computer has considerably improve our quality of life. For instance, the Robert controlled by the computer has been used to do some surgery, which is more accurate than the doctor's operation. In addition, The internet makes the people lived in the different countries communicated conveniently. As many Chinese say that "computer completely change our life "