小学二年级英语作文:Our house

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The location of my home is on 25 Wills Street, it is an apartment. it has one bedroom and one restroom, but not car parking space. Althought my home is small but it is so sweet because there are many photos on the wall. The painting of walls is white except my room is pink colour.