2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowdays,computer becom more and more popular and impertant.However,with the development of this tecknowledge,how can we deal with it? So the problems have producted!And then what we must do is modify the computer and man.It means that we should devote the work between them.firstly,we must clear that computer just our tool in our darily life.The man are the turely master of our life. There are some worries,computer will take place of our mankind!As far as for me,it is really not to worry about it.Because of man being the founder of computer,computers workiong upon man.But it dose not means computer has no any threathen.Facing this,we must let man smarter than computer,which means in some directions,we must do them by ourshelves,not do everything by computer.If we use the computer instand of the mind of our mankind,meaning our minds maybe sweaker than computer. Finally,if we can solve the problem that the computer and man,we can conthrol the computer,not worry about the computer will conthrol us!