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The Dragon Boat Festival is our Chinese traditional festival.The purpose of the festival is to memory Quyuan,a famous Chinese poet.On that day,we use many ways to celebrate it. Eating Zongzi is one of important parts on the Dragon Boat Festival.It is said that in order to avoid Quyuan was eaten by creature in the river,people threw Zongzis into river as many as they can.Now we wrap Zongzi and Eating Zongzi on this day.Playing Dragon Boat is another important activity on the Dragon Boat Festival.People are devided into several groups and those who row fastest are the winner.In addition,in some place,people hang Aicao on the doors and windows to offend unluck things. The Dragon Boat Festival represents our Chinese culture.Through it,we can learn the spirit of loving our country.We should not only succeed it by different kinds of activities but also spread our culture around the world.
