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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17441[网页划词已开启]
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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复杂句使用不错,句法规范;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;作者词汇表达较丰富,但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

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It seem that people can't leave computer any more. In our daily life, no matter studying or working, communicat with other people ,all of this should use computer.It is no doubt that computer have become the important part in our life. Abolutely, the computer bring us too much benefits and convenience .with computer we can get rid of much fussy and poor task,improve efficiency ,reduce the wase of resource.Especially for the enterpise which have manger computer system as ERP will greatly improve the efficiency of internal process. However, every thing have other sides, when we enjoying the benefit that the computer giving us ,please don't forget it also will bring tha bad influence,for example, more and more teengers lost themselves in online games and many people say they almost forget how to handwirtten because of them always wirtting with keying.

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