2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；请注意分段。

there is an heated discussion whether computer and man are more linked. does anyone hold the same attitude towards this issue ? definitely not,in fact opinions vary from person to person some maintain that now is information age .computer is an important equipment for people, firstly people can use computer search the internet ,secondly student can use computer do their is homework,thirdly businessman use computer and net do business,and so on however quit a few people hold the opposite viewpoint that now people use computer more time than before it may harmful to our health, for another some people can be addicted in the internet to my way of thinking we should use computer more efficiency ,do the right thing