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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3095
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题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用;作者词汇表达灵活性稍有欠缺,请重视拼写检查;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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Nowadays,the internet is more and more popular.People use the internet to find something that they need,to buy anything they want to and to chating with their friends ,families even strangers and so on. I believe that the it is wise to make friends online. Althoheugh in the internet has many dangerous information and people ,we can not deny it`s benifit side.The reasons as follows: Firstly,when we are free and we do not want go outside we can chat with someone who may be a stranger . Strangers not all bad people . There are many people who like us chat online .So I think we can make friends online. I believe everybody all feel sad and do not tell families, friends and classmates and so on sometimes.We just want tell a stranger. So chating with strangers online not a bad thing.It can help relax ourselves and decrease our pressure.Sconderly, there are not many bad people in the internet,we need not too worried to chat with strangers online. So I suppose that it is wise to make friends online.

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