2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Computer became a indispensable part of life in human daily life. the computer added to the humans develop. but everything has two side. advantage and disadvantage people away said the computer is her important working partner. if he without the computer one day , he must can not do anything. Computer leading to maiximun profit and minimun cost . you can search amount of free source in internet. also , internet promote the communication of people.enhance the world development, whatever economic and history. from other side, the computer game become popular, increasingly teenager addicted it. the drop out school in order get more leisure play computer games . at same time ,the sex culture spread fast in internet so as to leading the teenager accept it early , its harmful of jovern mental develop. above this harm will be added to the teenager crime rate . Its bad for society peace. so , the computer is closely to our life , we should use it in right way .