2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章学术词汇使用熟练，词汇表达较为丰富；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

In recent years,with the improvement of the internet, more and more people use computers in our common life.It is well-known that computers make the life more convenient and funny.No one can deny the fact that we cannot emphasise the importance of computers too much.If computers can think like human beings,it may be a good thing.Nevertheless,what a terrible thing that human beings think like computers! Why do I say like that? To begin, people think like computers, which means that we will live a life without innovation.Thus, we will never progress.What's more, people think like computers,which makes the communication without emotion.The humor ,funny and love will gradually disappear. From what has been discussed above,we can easily draw a conclusion that computers are significant in our daily life, however,we cannot think like computers,and we should communicate with each other in realistic life instead of on the internet.