2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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At present,there are a lot of goods existing a problem about excessive packaging.Such many people have focused on this phenomenon.As far as I can see that have four point reason to cause this situation.First,excessive Packaging can bring more profits to manufacturer then common packaging.Second,Some not professional processor think that excessive packaging can give the goods better protection,so they use more Packaging materials to pack the goods.Third,many manufacturer go after a beautiful packaging for goods,cause the packaging-cost too high,this is another excessive packaging.The last,no requirement about the packaging in the commodity transaction. In my opinion,excessive packaging not only a waste phenomenon,but an unfair commodity transaction.It will cost consumers added money.And many packaging except protect the goods,not other function.I have my own suggestions for excessive packaging,one is set up rules about the packaging,as the packaging-cost can't exceed 10% of the cost of goods .Another one is standardize the requirements of the packaging.I wish commodity transaction can be more convenient and benefits for consumers.