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In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above diagram,we can observe distinctly that it provides information concerning the tourist destination favored in the city of Liorente of different age groups.Each figure for destinations show the percentage of tourists who visited the destinations on their last holiday.There are four age groups-twenties,thirties,forties and over 50-year-old group. The most favored destination for all age groups was shopping centres.The percentage of tourists who visited there was more than 80%,and 95% of tourists of tourists of the forties group visited there.The percentages of tourists who visited art galleries,zoos and museums increased as the age of tourists increased.For example,only 21% of people in the twenties visited art galleries however,81% of the oldest age group visited there.On the other hand,the percentages of tourists who visited nightclubs,discotheques and cinemas decreased as the age increase.For instance,87% of the tourists in twenties visited iscotheques however,only 5% of the oldest age group did so. To sum up,we have no difficulty but can draw the conclusion that favored destinations were different for each age group.However.almost all tourists visited shopping centers.