2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；文中应增加从句和复合句的使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above diagram,we can observe distinctly that it provides information concerning the tourist destination favored in the city of Liorente of different age groups.Each figure for destinations shows the percentage of tourists who visited the destinations on their last holiday.There is four age groups -twenties,thirties,forties and over 50-year-old group. The most favored destination for all age groups was shopping centres.The percentage of tourists who visited there was more than 80%,and 95% of tourists of the forties group visited there.The percentages of tourists who visited art galleries,zoos and museums increased as the age of tourists increased.For example,only 21% of people in the twenties visited art galleries however,81% of the oldest age group visited there.On the other hand,the percentages of tourists who visited nightclubs,discotheques and cinemas decreased as the age increase.For instance,87% of the tourists in twenties visited discotheques however,only 5% of the oldest age group did so. To sum up,we have no difficulty but can draw the conclusion that favored destinations were different for each age group.However,almost all tourists visited shopping centers.