2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(22):泰国旅游

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After traveling to Thiland,I am generally satisfied with your service of high quality.As for me,the local guides are filled of passion with those tourists,especially with elder people in the group.And that they told us the stories clearly and funny has a great impression on me,what is more,It expand my view of the world.However,the problem is that we dont like the food that you proved ,and finally we had to buy it by ourselves.So I suggest that you should offer us a maket where we can find some good food.