2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(22):泰国旅游

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；请注意分段。

After traveling to Thiland,I am generally satisfied with your service of high quality.As for me,the local guides are filled with passion to those tourists,especially to old people of the group.And that they told us the funny stories clearly made a great impression on me,what is more,It expands my view of the world.However,the problem is that we dont like the food that you proved ,and finally we had to buy it by ourselves.So It will be very kind of you to offer us a good market where we can find some food with propel price.