2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

Now online shopping is a fashion.In fact it has an effect on the life of many people，as follows. First,More and more people prefer online shopping.They have no time and no energy to go to the physical stores,bacause they are busy working all day and night.This proves that online shopping is good for the office workers.It may save time and energy. At the same time ,many people also think that the price online is cheaper than in physical stores.And furthermore there are more choices in the net. Although online shopping brings the people more benefits,it still has some adverse effects.For instance ,people often buy counterfeit and shoddy products in the online.That will waste our money and mood.In addition to this ,the price on the net may be more expensive than in the physical stores,for the same products. For these reasons,we choose the online shopping or not? As far as I am concerned,we may buy the same products in the online as in the physical stores.