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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:2998
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题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
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文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;能够使用一些不错的从句。

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The way to success is also concerned about larges number of persons.Just as Abraham Lincoln's famous remark,give me six hours to chop down a tree,and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.From what he said,we could find that one indisputable fact that the full preparation is a prior reason to success. Obviously,there are many factors that can contribute to one's success,a person is more likely to succeed if he is hard-working,self-confident,whether he is at school or at work.Meanwhile,the full preparation plays the most significant role in achieving success.There are many instances could explain this view,but I think the following is sufficient. People is often asked to complete tasks with the limited time.To begin with,they must have collected somethings that could help them to finish it easily.what's more,it's no denying that anyone who has prepared sufficiently is more likely to succeed than those who lack this process,even though the latter maybe much more talented and competent.Consequently,we can safely arrive the conclusion that the full preparation is essential for success.

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