2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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The way to success is also concerned about larges number of persons.Just as Abraham Lincoln's famous remarked,giving me six hours to chop down a tree,and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.From what he said,we could find that one indisputable fact that the full preparation is a prior reason to success. Obviously,there are many factors that can contribute to one's success,a person is more likely to succeed if he is hard-working,self-confident,whether he is at school or at work.Meanwhile,the full preparation plays the most significant role in achieving success.There are many instances that could explain this view,but I think the following is sufficient. People are often asked to complete tasks and time is limited.To begin with,they must have collected something that could help them to finish it easily.What's more, anyone who has prepared sufficiently is more likely to succeed than those who lack the preparation,even though the latter maybe much more talented and competent.Consequently,we can safely arrive the conclusion that the full preparation is essential for success.