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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4567
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色。

用户练习作文:

As we all known, with the development of internet, now increasingly people join a part in using computer in their life. Obviously, it has changed our communicate ways to each other. We only write a letter or take a telephone in many yeas ago which is not have the internet if we want to communicate with distance families or friends, that's so inconvenience. But now, we have much more ways to remain our relationships, such as MSN, QQ, and so on. It improve our efficient of life. More and more people are prefer this way. However, every coin has two sides. Although the internet changed traditional communication and make it rich, now people's relationship in not deep that ever before. Because this is the speed year,life temple is more and more quickly, we may have no spare time to communicate with friends, because it's so easy to know about other people's life. They show their photos and address in order to make more good friends, so you havn't to ask where are they ,what they do, the internet can tell you all you want to know. As far as i am concerned, this is the tend to use internet, but we also should increase our interpersonal communicate,because face to face is still a good way to remain relationships.

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