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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

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文中词汇表达较恰当,学术词汇表达灵活;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章层次较为清晰;请注意分段。

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Under the main stream of pre-education,the minor has been suffering a vital pressure of extra lesson from their own parents.It is admittedly that there was never some willing from the child we could have seen.And this is the point which is needed to consider for social institution and educator. Here has two aspects of figures of the accounts for distasting from infant.One of it describes that the additional lectures are too hard to understand and apply,it thoroughly beyond the child's mental and intelligent capacity to a academic extent.Another perspective says that the child just do the combative psychology to their parents,it is the common process with the child getting grown-up.

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