2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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According to the passage,we can know that more higher degree you get ,more money you can earn.For example, the unemployment rate of professional degree is 2.4% in 2011,and the median weekly earnings of professional degree is 1665 $ in 2011. There is no doubt that people pay more attention to the education pays. Because the level of education experience is play a role part in our life. At the same time, it is influent the level of income directly. In order to get ride of the weekly earn ,we can improve the level of education experience in some way. Such as the teacher can teach some student face to face and one by one.