2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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In mordern society,people pay more attention to education. The picture conveys us the message that if you get more education you will be paid more in future and easier to have work. Reasons for people who have high degree will be employed easier,of course,are in abundance.They have great basic knowledge,professional skills to complete their missions and cope with the problems in the work process well.High education give them mature thoughts and ability. Because of the reasons reminded above.They are enough to get high salary.Knowledge is the treasure which we all known.Employers will gain more benefits from them even pay more to them. My point is that we should work hard.Only in this way can we pave the way for ourselves in the future.