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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear company, i knew about with your new product named 5670 from December15th to 22nd at the NewYork exhibition. And i am very interested with it. Could you please send me the price list and instruction? I am appreciated with your cooperation. i hope to establish business relationship with you. Best wishes, Hubin
