英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:写信

可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Mr.Johnson: we have received 3,000 products on December 22.but there is a question is that according to our signing of the No.35 order,we should have 3,500 products.In addition to this ,500 products we have not receive.please check your product list ,we are looking forward to your early reply. wanghaiyang 2008 12.23.13