文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;句式变化多样;文中词汇丰富度不足,拼写检查也要重视。
Everyone have a name,perhaps you think the name is so nomal even never think what is the mean about it.But,there are two different viewpoint to discuss. Some people think it is not impotant of a name,because it is just a sign for a man and has not much mean with the name,so we can call a name informal.Much more is there are so many people in the world so we have a big rate to have the same name with others,then we should not mind it. Other people do not think like that,they believe that our parents give our name,it is special for us.It have the parents exception on it,at the same time