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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(21):自信

发布时间:2013-11-01 17:17浏览次数:525
要求:
Write a composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below.
自信 (self-confidence) 对一个人来说是非常重要的,但不是每个人都能做到自信。谈谈你的看法。
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文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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Self-confidence is crucial for us,however,not all of us understand it. Firstly,self-confidence means believing ourselves.Due to Chinese traditional culture and custom,many mistake confidence for pride.In fact,a recent research shows,for instance,those,full of optimism and confidence,which is definitely different from pride, are easier to succeed. Secondly,self-confidence is based on many inspects,such as prefect test marks,sense of humour,good-looking appearance and so on.So,we are supposed to seize every chance to boarden our horizen,enrich our knowledge to improve our ability. Lastly,self-confidence can be cultivated by taking social activities.Making a speech,or taking an active part in debate will increase your confidence.In addition,it is a efficient way to pay compliments on ourselves. In a word,self-confidence is to our life what lamp is to ship.

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