作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Self-confidence is crucial for us,however,not all of us understand it. Firstly,self-confidence means believing ourselves.Due to Chinese traditional culture and custom,many mistake confidence for pride.In fact,a recent research shows,for instance,those,full of optimism and confidence,which is definitely different from pride, are easier to succeed. Secondly,self-confidence is composed of many inspects,such as prefect test marks,sense of humour,good-looking appearance and so on.So,we are supposed to seize every chance to widen our horizons and enrich our knowledge to improve our ability. Lastly,self-confidence can be cultivated by taking social activities.Making a speech,or taking an active part in debate will increase your confidence.In addition,it is an efficient way to pay compliments on ourselves. In a word,self-confidence is to our life what lamp is to ship.