学术词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
As Madam Curie,who discovered the element radium,once said,"Life is not easy for any one of us. We must work, and above all we must believe in ourselves,"which,however,not all of us understand it. Firstly,self-confidence means believing ourselves.Due to Chinese traditional culture and custom,many mistake confidence for pride.In fact,those,full of optimism and confidence,which is definitely different from pride, are easier to succeed. Secondly,self-confidence is composed of many inspects,such as prefect test marks,sense of humour,good-looking appearance and so on.Therefore,we are supposed to seize every chance to widen our horizons and enrich our knowledge to improve our ability. Lastly,self-confidence can be cultivated by taking social activities.Making a speech,or taking an active part in debate will increase your confidence.In addition,it is an efficient way to pay compliments on ourselves. In a word,self-confidence is to our life what lamp is to ship.